Is that his nose or is he always frowning? From your other comics it looks like it's supposed to be a nose but I can't help but always see him as sad.
Maybe you should rotate it a bit to avoid any confusion?
Is that his nose or is he always frowning? From your other comics it looks like it's supposed to be a nose but I can't help but always see him as sad.
Maybe you should rotate it a bit to avoid any confusion?
Thanks for your comment! Yes, I'll try to adjust its shape so that it looks more like a nose.
The lighting effects are lovely, pretty much perfectly done. You have a really nice style overall :)
oh gosh, thank you so much!!
This is just clip-art, you should only upload things you actually made.
the original art does not look like this, i edited it
I really reeeeally like the colouring and shading on this, its such a lovely aesthetic.
Aw thank you so much! <3
I really like the vibe on this, feels so vintage. Also your anatomy is on POINT, nice one!
Thank you!
Legit the best Adventure Time fanart I've ever seen. Fantastic stuff.
thank you !
The MS Paint backdrop with the colours of the character and scribbly eyes are both cool ideas that I like a lot and the linework is pretty alright, but I feel like the hair and bow need toning down a bit. Makes the image seem cluttered.
Overall this is nice, good shit.
Thank you!
This ain't the first time someone said the bow and the hair was too big lol.
Just a really pleasant style and image.
Thnx friendo :^)
Yikes, dunno why this has a 1/5 from 3 votes, seems super fucking harsh lol
This is actually p good, linework and perspective are all solid. Not a huge fan of the eyes but that's more down to personal taste.
Could work more on the colouring. Seems a bit too saturated, specially on the shirt. Shading also seems a bit harsh like he's under a giant spotlight or w/e and I think the lighting highlights on his clothes and skin are a bit unnecessary, like is he covered in oil and wearing leather? Just doesn't work for me yknow.
Overall this is p dope, you constructed a really nice figure with some smooth linework. Fuck those dudes giving it a hard time in the ratings that's just sly.
Thanks a lot man. I will say compared to the other ones I did, I overdid the lighting and shadows. Sometimes i get into the habit of doing that.
Thanks for the critique!
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